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Production Blog: Peer Review

 Hey guys and welcome back to our blog! In my previous blogs, you heard that I filmed. Then, you heard about me editing my short film on CapCut. Next, you heard how I had to re-film and had to cut out some scenes. Today, you are going to hear about peer- reviewing. What this means is I got my friends to look at our movie. When they look at my short filmed, I asked them to give their thoughts both positive and negative. In total I got two people to peer review my short film and I'm going to tell you about that. So, first let's talk about things that were said about the titles. First,  most really were in love with the titles and they thought that the titles matched the genre perfectly.  They also thought that the titles were really unique and something they haven't seen while still being "on genre" and they liked the effects matching the movie title . But, while that was said from one of my friends there was another one of my friends who had an opposing view. That friend thought that the titles didn't match the genre. They said that while it had that blood dripping aspect to it, it didn't really give off scary vibes. They thought that it was like horror genre but made for children and thought it looked cute more than scary. I decided to keep this in because my group-mate and I ultimately liked it. One of them thought that there were too many titles. They thought that while they understood it was an opening scene the titles seemed way too back to back. They also thought that I needed to make the amber alert part "more clear" but other than that everything else was positive. Thank you guys for reading my blog, be back the next time when I make final re-edits. 



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